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Post by Splasher Sun Jul 15, 2012 8:36 am

First topic message reminder :

Poem about poetry tongue

As I begin to read the poem, I lose myself in the hedges of emotion,
Like a wild protest, causing a commotion,
In my mind, the thoughts are provoked,
They’ve stopped circulating; my brain has been choked,
So I step back, take a new perspective,
Now the thoughts are collective, they can make sense,
I’ve grasped the concept, and now I know it’s not just rambling nonsense.

I'm new to writing poems, so go easy laugh

EDIT: I know this is really short, I might expand on it later smile


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Post by Splasher Fri Dec 28, 2012 5:54 pm

Well, I haven't written anything in a while, so yeah.

Lost

The only thing worse than not knowing,
Is thinking you do,
I feel like my mind is slowly going,
Each time I look at you.

Because you're too hard to read,
Do you even notice me?
Have you taken the lead,
In guiding me out to sea?

Where I can get lost again,
Man overboard about to drown,
A sensation I can't explain,
I'm one more "we need to talk" away from a meltdown.

So please don't let this be,
What I think it is,
Put your faith in me,
So I can be more than just "a friend of his".


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Post by ¡sonia! Sun Dec 30, 2012 1:24 pm

I like that one smile
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