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Jesse's poetry
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Jesse's poetry
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Poem about poetry
As I begin to read the poem, I lose myself in the hedges of emotion,
Like a wild protest, causing a commotion,
In my mind, the thoughts are provoked,
They’ve stopped circulating; my brain has been choked,
So I step back, take a new perspective,
Now the thoughts are collective, they can make sense,
I’ve grasped the concept, and now I know it’s not just rambling nonsense.
I'm new to writing poems, so go easy
EDIT: I know this is really short, I might expand on it later
Poem about poetry
As I begin to read the poem, I lose myself in the hedges of emotion,
Like a wild protest, causing a commotion,
In my mind, the thoughts are provoked,
They’ve stopped circulating; my brain has been choked,
So I step back, take a new perspective,
Now the thoughts are collective, they can make sense,
I’ve grasped the concept, and now I know it’s not just rambling nonsense.
I'm new to writing poems, so go easy
EDIT: I know this is really short, I might expand on it later
Last edited by Splasher on Mon Aug 06, 2012 8:29 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Re: Jesse's poetry
Well, I haven't written anything in a while, so yeah.
Lost
The only thing worse than not knowing,
Is thinking you do,
I feel like my mind is slowly going,
Each time I look at you.
Because you're too hard to read,
Do you even notice me?
Have you taken the lead,
In guiding me out to sea?
Where I can get lost again,
Man overboard about to drown,
A sensation I can't explain,
I'm one more "we need to talk" away from a meltdown.
So please don't let this be,
What I think it is,
Put your faith in me,
So I can be more than just "a friend of his".
Lost
The only thing worse than not knowing,
Is thinking you do,
I feel like my mind is slowly going,
Each time I look at you.
Because you're too hard to read,
Do you even notice me?
Have you taken the lead,
In guiding me out to sea?
Where I can get lost again,
Man overboard about to drown,
A sensation I can't explain,
I'm one more "we need to talk" away from a meltdown.
So please don't let this be,
What I think it is,
Put your faith in me,
So I can be more than just "a friend of his".
Last edited by Splasher on Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:22 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Typo)
Splasher- Admin
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Re: Jesse's poetry
I like that one
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