GreenDAyBass' poetry

So much wonder and thought
put into your heart
at the truest desire

So much ease
put into the perception
of peace

I grant you this loving dream
I grant you this loving story
to tell you why I do,
why I care about you

Only happiness can define you,
can find your true desires as it
leads you into the path
where all your sorrows have washed away

Only sadness can destroy you,
for that reason only, I'll let you know
I won't let the world of sadness overcome
your world of happiness

I'll be there for you, smiling
laughing along at the cares,
eliminating the darkness that spreads
throughout your sould

I'll be there for you, loving
to show you how much I care,
promising the certain kindness you cling onto
as a leaflet's bloom disguises a certain sharp image

As the raindrop falls so vividly from the sky
I will let you know that the true reminder
is the rainstorm following your path
to wash away the pain that was left behind

As the light lingers, surrounding you
I'll let you know that this light
will touch your heart and spread
such as a solid fragrance would
into the empty light

As the whispers speak volumes,
I'll let you know that these whispers
will guide you
into such a place
where all you see are happy tears

Happiness never decreases by being shared

wow great job Adam!!!

Adam, you have one post and one reputation, that's a new record

As always, your poem is asdfghjkl;' (amazing)

Lost like the wind that unravels around you
so gently as it spirals through travesty
Found like the sunshine that travels through
all the clouds that bring anew melody to sing along to, for you

Like a dream following you into what is meant to be, with thee
promise me you'll never forget all the times healing has surfaced with ease
Travel along the empty shores into what is known
is tomorrow's glow lingering along the surface of your heart

Breathe a sigh of relief and maybe tomorrow's sunshine
will shine brightly for you and me
Take my hand above the flowers as it lingers so smoothly along your skin
and hold on to those memories planted along the surface of the flowers petal
for they will remain in the betterment of your heart

Smile like a flower blooming as light breathes life onto it
in the still air, on a cloudless day, remember what was lost will be found again
Wash away those fears, those doubts and those anguishes and replace them
with the understanding that there is someone knowingly there, who will care
in your presence, forever

Dream of tomorrow's path to take you away onto a destination to home
where your heart truly resides, as it is gathered with the loving effect of those who surround your presence
Know at that moment you'll have found your heart that was once lost in defying shadows
and is now reunited with your satisfaction that at this moment your heart lies in a dream
that is known to be of many conquests that overwhelmed the pain that lingered

So deeply and passionately that you can now go back to finally say
your long lost love has been conquered into the promise that you'll one day
find love again

Love has never been so suspended
that as you pluck the petals of a rose
I question to the hidden truth
if you had ever felt the need to live beyond
the question then
where does that piece of love
lead us?

this is so nice!

Still 100% rep rate

Both of them are amazing, I like how you can write long poems and then follow it up with an extremely short one, with just as much power.

As I fall asleep,
I think of you as my love sonnet,
As the petal on the flower that lingers in lights bloom,

As the arrow that frequents a visit, from the fire on light's gloom,
From the love of Cupid, I show you the worth,
As I love you from generations, from a flower

I love you as all things should be loved,
From the shadows to the light your heart resides,
Would grant you the freedom, of coming to love

I love you as all sunsets give a peace of relief,
I love you as all sunrises grant you strength on light's existence,

I love you for what I have fallen for,
I love you as if it were only found,
By the petal that surfaces on a warm light's embrace,
By the flower that lingers in warm air, hidden from shadows beneath,

Rose, I grant you, the several petals of a flower,
That would express the light, within the beauty, embraces

So close that I place each petal on your hand,
So close that each petal forms a flower in your heart,
So close, so near, your affection is truly sincere,
That I lay my hand upon yours,
To flourish the garden of you

Lay me down,
By the gentle river,
Where afar, many more have gone
Lay me down, by the long tree and pray in sympathy,
That I will be with thee
Believing,
Rise with me, by the gentle song, that sings anew melody,
Believe, that I will be there, waiting for thee,
By your hand, as you close it with ease,
Sigh with belief, I'll be there,
Awaiting thee, by the warm air,
Tear for me, raise your arms, evenly,
So you can feel, the loving grace,
Lay me down, atop of the river,
Waters flow so sudden, nearly drifting,
Into an empty shore,
Breathe with ease, for I have gone,
But remain in peace,
Feel my flow of tears, crawl down your fears,
Maybe one day, I'll see you again,
Lay a rose, after me,
Traveling with beauty, across the calm waters,
Into those beneath our dreams,
I'll find the rose you left behind, I promise
To carry with me, into Heaven's reality,
Carry me ashore, into Heaven's still waters,
Where I'll see thee, standing beside me

dude, why are you so good at that?

Survivor of Violence wrote:dude, why are you so good at that?

This.

Also, 120% rep rate. Not bad.

The undying love I have for you
Is so far, but so near,
Just want to touch your heart,
To aid you through those sorrows,
Through those pains, those anguishes,
I just want you to know, that I love you
Like the rain that washes away your tears,
I'll be there, hand-to-hand, hand on shoulder,
So that you'll have a shoulder to cry on,
I'll be your light, to show you embrace,
I'll grant you a heart, to show you I care,
Let this rainstorm wash away your sorrows,
Out, afar, into the ocean, past this empty shore,
I'll show you the miracle that lives inside you,
I'll show you how your sorrows lifted into the still air,
As I was there, when you cried,
As I was there, when you needed a shoulder,
I'll wipe away those tears, hug you so gently,
For what I can see, is your beauty
Making it's presence

I deeply apologize,
For all the little things that didn't mean anything,
I sincerely apologize
For all the times that suffering has surfaced with you,
I'm sorry, for those things that could have let you know,
That tomorrow will let you know,
About our promises, our satisfactions,
I sincerely say I'm sorry, for nothing that I ever did,
I honestly say I'm sorry, for winding you down,
I tell you I have, as I am able
To express my deepest sympathies
Of constant deliberation, that it would mean to me,
How truly sorry I really am, as I wish
To tell you how sorry I am for loving you,
I awaken at the finest moment,
Where perfection is made equal with you,
When the broken rose begins to fix again,
I am reminded that I only fell for you,
Of the seldom being that you are, I pray
That you'll be O.K.
I realize, why should I be sorry,
When all I did
Was love you

I don't know why I said good-bye
Don't know why I left you behind
Didn't want to let you go
Just wanted to see you in happy bliss

Beyond the shadows of doubt
I see your smile love in grace
I see your heartache disappear
See the light brighten your eyes
Didn't want to lose you

As the sun sighs and sets so high
It reminds me of the love that went by
Gives me hope and pride
When all I did was love you too
Through and through I'll be there
In loving arms, in open hearts
Throughout the pain I'll let you know
I'll be there loving you so
Didn't want to say good-bye

All I've ever known is that I was there
In Heaven, by your side
Now that you're gone all that remains
Are memories of what used to be
So peaceful and loving too
All I want you to know is that I do
I still love you though you're gone
In Heaven

As I'm listening to your name call
Out of the skies
In Heaven's loving
As the breeze gently falls upon my tears
I'm reminded of you
Seeing you so near, so full of joy, givings too
All I want is to let you know,
I still love you, I do

Even though you're gone, I promise to let you know
I'll be there waiting in open arms
Just to see your smile full of embrace
As the light beneath the sky lingers in Heaven's light
Well I know, I'll be there in your grace
So perfect and soundly alive
I'll know that this is you
In angels arms

It's true
When I think of you I know
Your smile is what makes you beautiful
It's true
When I see you I know
You're already an angel that Heaven
Has taken away, on this day
When I met you
It's true
I'll remember you for what you brought to me
For those joys of simple delight you gave me
For those promises you made true

As I see you linger in Heaven,
I'll know when I hear your voice
That it's that of an angel singing,
Not for the thousand tears you have poured on this day,
Not for the memories you have silently collected,
Not for the rose you took with you in Heaven,
For you, for your smile, your delight, your embrace
That as I see you, I'll know I do

I love you too

Endless thoughts
carry our dreams
to longing perfections
of empty promises

Loving memories
awaken with ease
into calm
on weary
stories

The road remains
unbroken

Lines of emptiness,
Redundant wording,
Words of despair, words of care,
Of promise, of hope,
Meaning of a line is in it's own form,
In it's own meaning, transparent,
As it seems, is a world of many emotions,
Of many experiences, this is not a word of wonder,
Not of a word of purpose, but rather, it is,
What a story means to follow, what an experience means to others,
What it means to write,
In simplicity,
In complex pride; satisfactions,
In hidden meanings, in darker roads
That it seems, the written word struggles
To devour the taste of emptiness,
To cling onto the idea that there is hope,
That there is a world full of struggles,
That seems so sudden, so transparent,
It helps the mind capture those empty meanings,
Those written words, those true deliberations
Of what it means to capture that essence
Take the essence in, capture its meaning,
Let it travel so with great intent, with extent so far
So near, that the words are simply your greatest strength,
Are simply your greatest struggles,
Are simply your greatest aid,
Let it be known, that those words are only meant to let you know,
I come with great care, with great promise, in the hopes and dreams
That you will one day, be there and say
I'm free

great job Adam!

After I see you lay to rest forever
beyond the grave in your name
I linger above the words of what was meant to stay

I watch over you as I leave beyond this shadow of doubt
to truthfully see your burdens wash away forever
as I bear witness to see what is meant to stay

To say good-bye wouldn't be the truth as I only
am saying hello in my final rest
before being laid down

I have fought with conquests to conquer the slain day
I have redeemed myself with gracefulness to see you
standing one day again and I hear the whispers
of the majestic beauty that embraces the memory
of loving you to no end that it would seem that
I will lay my final rest in your honor

Please play those melodies for me and you
so that as I arrive in Heaven angels will play
that song in my loving grace for me
to you

Rest loving one and tear not for me,
but for the world as I have remained so long
to the peace of flower as the petals travel so swiftly
and smoothly that one day your memories
will be planted along my grave and they will sprout
without any lingering pain

Those flowers will sprout with gratefulness as the memories
of love songs will flourish in your greater care
Trust me beautiful one as I will always lead you and aid
in your heart

Though I'm gone I'll remain with your true loving power
so closely that the embrace is worth a thousand words
of kind rejoice
So passionate and sincere that your presence
will forever remain deeply buried with the promise
that one day I will see you standing beside me, hand on hand
heart to heart and that I will learn
to forever love you again with the peace of flower you have left me

I will miss you so dearly and so closely that you are in my heart of memories

nice! really cool dude!

Taking flight to watch you prosper
into loves simple dream
For I see you as an angel
simply awaiting the rising of the sun, of your wings

Fly so high and boldly so that I can
show you the care of a greater promise
that will only be seen with your satisfaction as I am able
to withstand the only dream that I have
of loving you

Let me send a gentle breeze to frolic your cares into ease
as your eyes tell the beauty of what it means to be
So simple and real that as I watch and take flight directly
above your heart I am in belief that I will be your dove
of a guardian angel

As the sunset dawns a new day all the flowers planted
will not show decay as I grant you the promise those flowers
will show the memories buried so deeply with intent
of promising you the satisfaction to love again

When that love shines through to live through on a memory of rest
is each petal forming a sincere place that can only be called
Heaven's flower

Closely enough that as I place each flower to surround you,
your beauty, the petals emerge so dearly as one to fabricate
the long love's existence into hopes that you will one day
see the flower that rose with lights lingering bloom for you
for my love

From the first petal to the last, each petal will take flight
directly above your heart in the hopes and dreams
that one day, the long lost love you have ever so frequented a visit
will be found again

Amazing, Adam

From the time withering in pure love's existence
to the dreams mended by your gracefulness
Where all the darkness flows within beauty,
out of shadows, into light where your love is so profound

Perfections of life from gracefulness are ambitions
to telling you where love is found, how so often it's placed
By your heart, into the soul where your shadows of light
truly resides

I love you for the depths of Heaven grants you purity,
in longing, between the light and darkness that etches so frequently
along your path into the presence that conquers those sorrows

I love you as a flower blooms in lights existence,
between the petals that commands your longing essence
I love you for sprouting and being free, for sharing the world
of your promises and ambitions

Your heart truly resides along a path of frequent clarity
so closely and intently that as I inherit the roses placed upon your name
I grant you a wish from Heaven's dream

So profound with promise and ambition
that as I love you this way I'll know this rose
is meant to stay in light's frequent visit,
away from the empty shadows

Lest we remember those struggles,
in yesterday's tribulation
to tomorrow's frustration

Let us not forget those tears we shed
from gratefulness, to the cries we led
Let us dream of the promise of beauty
as angels we fled to our serenity

Yearn for your soul to take you onto a journey
that is beyond, yet near to our loving memory
Breathe life into those paths on sincere gratitude
away from the shadows that empties your hearts strength

For our perfections cannot be seen or heard
as they can only seem to be frequented with ease
Along the gentleness that surrounds our compromising successes
towards the path of our known dreams, hopes and clarity

Allow the tear to travel swiftly down your lane of memories
as it awaits an embrace to take you within your soul of grace
Travel along the many roads renewing your strength into tomorrow's
heartfelt and sweet promises that will allow you to see
your soul is one within beauty, of a gentle touch to surrender
the many tears that await you to take you away from the pain